Afloat
Sinking
Deeper and deeper
I slowly drift to the bottom
Sinking
Disappearing into the darkness
As I except my fate
Sinking
No one around
My cries for help left unheard
Sinking
My lungs no longer in use
For my sorrow has drowned them
Sinking
Forever I lower
Into the ocean of despair
Sinking
Never to return
From the path I carved for myself
Sinking
Down I go
Not knowing if I want to return
Sinking
Depths only some reach
But only few reach the surface
Sinking
I found it
Rock bottom
Sinking
The stones hurt me
Digging into me as my body touched the floor
Sinking
Help me
I cried out in agony
Sinking
Just as my body goes limp
And my words stop flowing from my mouth
Sinking
My body starts to rise
Maybe this time I can stay afloat at the top
Sinking
Yet once again
My body gets heavy
Sinking
Now I realize
The stones placed at the bottom
Sinking
Will forever
Weigh me down
Sinking
I am forever stuck
Sinking and trying to stay afloat
About this poem
This poem describes my struggles with depression and how it felt when I lost all my friends all in one day. The poem describes how it felt when I was at my lowest and what it felt like when I was at rock bottom, and how still today I struggle everyday.
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Written on January 11, 2024
Submitted by Dakotahicks1228 on January 23, 2024
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Quick analysis:
Scheme | Abc Adx Aex Axc Abx Afx Axf Axd Axc Agx Agg Axx Ahx Axg Ahc Abe Axx |
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Closest metre | Iambic dimeter |
Characters | 993 |
Words | 239 |
Stanzas | 17 |
Stanza Lengths | 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3 |
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