The box made of dreams.

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  AIDA

  Positive and Enthusiastic Feedback:
  
  "The Box Made of Dreams" is a captivating and thought-provoking poem that truly resonates with the reader. The concept of building oneself a box made of dreams is both imaginative and inspiring. The poem effectively illustrates the power of self-reflection and letting go of troubles and negative thoughts.
  
  I particularly appreciate the uplifting tone throughout the poem. The idea of putting all troubles, failures, and sorrows inside the box and then joyfully sitting on it while laughing is a beautiful representation of finding freedom and happiness within oneself. It encourages the reader to let go and embrace a more positive outlook on life.
  
  Improvement Suggestions:
  
  While the overall message of the poem is delightful, there are a few adjustments that can enhance the flow and coherence. Considering the repetition of the phrase "then put in it," the poem could benefit from varying the language and structure to maintain the reader's engagement. Additionally, exploring the emotions and the transformative journey of locking dreams inside the box could further deepen the poem's impact.
  
  It would be beneficial to further develop the idea of never sharing the secret or throwing away the key, as these elements contribute to the mystery and allure of the box. Elaborating on why these actions are significant, and how they can preserve and protect dreams, would add depth to the poem.
  
  Lastly, the concluding line about the lack of knocks on the door feels slightly disconnected. Expanding on why the dreams being locked away guarantees a life without disturbance or setbacks would solidify the poem's central theme.
  
  Overall, "The Box Made of Dreams" is an enchanting piece that provides a valuable lesson on self-care and self-belief. With a few refinements to enhance the flow and cohesiveness, this poem has the potential to further inspire readers with its profound message. Keep up the fantastic work! more »

  LikeReply10 months ago
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  alanswansea18

  Someone told me to do this put all my troubles in a box on a shelf. Then look the next day and they won't be there.

  LikeReply10 months ago