Broken



My emotions were once dimensional.
I used to express them in three different figures,
but now what I feel
goes against what I say,
blinding all what is real,
and I don't even know how to feel.
If I were to be expressive
my words would be empty.
Their meaning would be infested in the confined spaces of my in-Securities,
Present,
but not bold enough to reveal themselves,
so they just disguise themselves as "nothing".

About this poem

In this poignant poem, I find myself reflecting on the internal struggle of my emotions, confined by insecurities that hinder genuine expression. I grapple with a complex emotional state, where my words transform into empty vessels, incapable of conveying the true depth of their meaning. The brokenness within me signifies a yearning for authenticity, a desire to reconcile what I feel with what I speak.

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Written on November 04, 2023

Submitted by lyndorh_m on February 02, 2024

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Scheme ABCDCCEFGHIJ
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 423
Words 84
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 12

Lindokuhle Mdlalose

 · 2003 · Durban

In the quiet refuge of my introverted world, I find solace in the art of free verse poetry. Writing becomes my sanctuary, a comforting escape from the complexities of the outside realm. Each line is a therapeutic exploration, helping me navigate the unspoken and confront the shadows of the past. Free verse empowers me to sculpt emotions without restraint, offering a unique canvas to articulate the nuances of my journey. Through the written word, I discover healing and a profound sense of self-betterment, transforming untold stories into a harmonious symphony of personal revelation. more…

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