Up And Down In This Perspective



Maroon leather couch

Big enough for two

Giggling, both towards the backrest

Our right hands' fingers casually intertwinned

You're shorter than me

but not much - it makes no difference on our left sides

Blanketbedspread ( mmmm spread ) ruffles covering

Skin on skin necks to heels

a left arm's greedy hand doesn't want to sleep

It wants to dream

It wants to touch

Admired much perfection

( that's what its called )

More giggling

Lithe posterior sashaying

Left and right fore and aft

Is up and down in this perspective

Left hand isn't the only thing that's greedy

And doesn't want to go to bed

About this poem

Originally published on DeviantArt. Written for my missing fiancé, Patty Ann Roberts, who was last seen in Lake Orion, Michigan in the company of the white supremacist narcissistic abuser she was trying to escape.

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Written on July 03, 2022

Submitted by TheProphetObblonge on April 14, 2024

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Scheme X X A A B X C X X X X X X C X X B X
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 610
Words 125
Stanzas 18
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1

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