My Whole



My soul knows of this love
I have never felt it in the flesh because it's sent from above
As a little girl I have always had this dream
Suffering through hell still wishing to be saved by my king
The sky is falling
I can hear him calling
I feel I am different from the rest
Not perfect
Humble knowing we are all blessed
Even when stressed
My whole the only man who understands my behavior
My mind will never be the same
My feelings are major
Even through all the rain and pain
My heart keeps growing
For my whole
My man
My king

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Sunshine
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Written on February 01, 2021

Submitted by amandak on May 03, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AAXBBBCXCCDXDXBXXB BX
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 542
Words 110
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 18, 2

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