Your Hands



Your Hands

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From birth, your touch, a cradle warm and kind,
first steps I took, your hand a steady guide.
Through tearful falls, your comfort I would find,
a silent vow, "My love will ever bide."
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Your gentle hands brushed tangles from my hair,
fixed any bow askew, with tender care.
You soothed the wounds unseen, a burden shared,
and held the stars within your hopeful stare.
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Your guiding nudge, not force, yet with concern,
a whispered plea, "Stay safe, there's much to do."
With love's soft hand, you shaped me as I learn,
the person I became, a testament to you.
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The lines of time upon your hands are traced,
now, aged and worn, they need my soft embrace,

About this poem

This beautiful poem is a heartfelt tribute to the hands of a loving caregiver, most likely a parent or guardian. The poem traces the journey of the speaker's life, from the earliest moments when the caregiver's hands cradled and guided them, to the later stages when the roles have reversed and the speaker now seeks to comfort and embrace the aged, weathered hands of their loved one. Overall, the poem is a poignant and heartfelt tribute to the enduring love and care embodied in the hands of a devoted caregiver, and the profound impact they have had on the speaker's life.  

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Written on May 23, 2024

Submitted by okello.p on May 22, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABAB CCXC DEDE XX
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 671
Words 142
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 5, 2

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 · 2001 · MUBENDE

OKELLO PATRICK, also known as MR.P THE SILENT POET, was born on August 19, 2001, in Mubende district. He began his educational journey at Kasenyi Church Of Uganda Primary School from 2009 to 2015, where he completed his Primary Leaving Examinations (PLE). Subsequently, he enrolled at Greenlight College in 2016 for his O' level studies and successfully completed his Uganda Certificate of Education (UCE) in 2019. In pursuit of further education, OKELLO PATRICK joined Kitgum Comprehensive College, where he completed his Uganda Advanced Certificate of Education (UACE) in 2020. In 2022, he gained admission to Makerere University to pursue a Bachelor's degree in Journalism and Communication, showcasing his passion for the field of media and communication. Throughout his academic journey, OKELLO PATRICK has demonstrated a commitment to learning and personal growth, setting a solid foundation for his future endeavors as a poet and communicator. more…

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