Am I too late? Is this to “immolate”..?



The flame that you lit
burned me -
caused me to scarper,

and the black ash
that remained -
the harbinger,
was far darker
than what I’d imagined.


It stained
every day since.


Like ink.

Truth.

Pushed to the brink.



I tend to the scars
from your fire…


I wash them,

and dry them,

and then add a salve -

but like Peter Rabbit
struggling free
from the briar,

I have a plan for only a second ahead
of escape -
no future planned,
no kindly retire.


As much as I try
to silence,
to quiet -
I still hear you say

“YOU FOOL.”

“YOU LIAR.”

“I SEE YOU, FULLY.”

“INTO THE LIGHT”.
“OUT OF THE MIRE.”

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Written on May 27, 2024

Submitted by Vencejo on May 27, 2024

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Scheme ABC XDCCX DX X XC E E X ABC XXXC CXXX B XC
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 635
Words 161
Stanzas 13
Stanza Lengths 3, 5, 2, 1, 2, 1, 1, 1, 3, 4, 4, 1, 2

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