The tide may rise and fall.



The ebb and flow of the tide rises and falls. The twilight darkens, and the call of the curlew can be heard as the sea laps against the damp, brown sands. The traveler Hasten for the town and can see the darkness settle over the town's rooftops and walls, but the sea continues to call out in the darkness. The morning arrives, and the horses in their stalls await the break of day, The traveler eventually returns to shore, where the tides continue to rise and fall, and there are no more calls to be heard.

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This poem is about the sea and death.

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Written on May 30, 2024

Submitted by alanswansea18 on May 30, 2024

Modified by alanswansea18 on May 30, 2024

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  • alexw.30385
    The ebb and flow of the tide mirrors the journey of the traveler, each rise and fall symbolizing moments of departure and return. The twilight's darkening and the sea's call evoke a sense of longing and connection to nature's rhythms. The imagery of the town settling into darkness juxtaposed with the sea's persistent call highlights the traveler's internal conflict between the familiar and the unknown. The return to shore signifies a completion of the journey, where the tides' ceaseless rhythm reflects the cyclical nature of life and the traveler's inner peace. 
    LikeReply6 months ago
  • Abbykesington
    You said the "morning arrives, and the horses in their stall await for day break, but it never comes," that bit need a little more explanation because how can the morning arrive and the day never breaks? So if you can work on that bit, it could read more complete. Thank you. 
    LikeReply6 months ago
    • alanswansea18
      I have to look into that thanks a bunch.
      LikeReply6 months ago
  • Abbykesington
    I have a poem titled the journey in my collection of poems. It's sold on amazon. The book is title Finish Line. May you can read more of my works and also be inspired.
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  • Abbykesington
    Such a poignant picture of death you have painted through your words. I could almost hear the call of the sea as the tide rises.... and feel the pain of the horses when day break never came.
    Thanks for sharing. Keep writing... 
    LikeReply6 months ago
    • alanswansea18
      I love anything to do with the sea and country. The poem The journey I had a lot of problems with maybe you can do something with it? Then you can have it and I'll delete mine.
      LikeReply6 months ago
    • Abbykesington
      Never delete yours. It's your journey and you have described it for the world to read and enjoy...
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    • alanswansea18
      I rewrote it 20 times but there's something missing.
      LikeReply6 months ago

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