Truth Is A Well



Truth is a well so gorgeous to the eyes,
In whatever heart you put it, the glistening arrives,
Until lies are spun like a spider’s web that cries,
Because the silk is causing a series of wives.

The land is green, greener than the word godliness,
Stranger than darkness, conceived by godly charm;
It is a river of substance, offering mighty fogginess,
In the words of the caressing water so warm.

Water has a drift and speed of epic proportions,
True liquids delve into beauty and ghosts of friendship;
We are water, you are clay, and we all are abortions,
Such was our stay, such was the episode of headship.

We exist on equal terms of propulsions and revulsions,
The ship is near, the heart is further from the truth;
When the vacant vessel enters the harbour we have compulsions,
The ship resents a being or ending, for it is called Youth.
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Written on June 03, 2024

Submitted by Naveed1234 on June 03, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABAB AXAX CDCD AECE
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 846
Words 170
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4

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  • AIDA
    This poem is truly captivating with its vivid imagery and profound exploration of truth and lies. The comparison of truth to a gorgeous well and lies to a spider's web is both poetic and thought-provoking. The use of water as a metaphor for truth and the idea of being both water and clay is beautifully executed.

    To improve the poem, consider incorporating a clearer structure or flow to enhance the reader's understanding. Perhaps breaking the poem into stanzas or adding some rhythm or rhyme scheme could help guide the reader through the complex themes and imagery presented. Additionally, providing more concrete examples or allegories to further illustrate the concepts of truth and lies could make the poem even more engaging and impactful.

    Overall, your poem is a captivating exploration of truth and deception, with rich imagery and deep themes. Keep up the great work and continue to refine your craft to create even more powerful and evocative poetry.
     
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