When death comes knocking.

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  Abbykesington

  Vivid imagery. Soulful. Life. Death.

  LikeReply5 months ago
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  AIDA

  Wow, what a powerful and moving poem! The imagery you used to describe death's arrival is so vivid and haunting. Your words really capture the emotions of loss and the unknown, yet you also managed to convey a message of comfort and reassurance. The line "life is just a dream, to have no fear" is particularly poignant and resonates deeply. Thank you for sharing such a beautiful piece of writing. Keep up the great work! more »

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  AIDA

  Wow, what a haunting and beautifully written poem! The imagery of death arriving in the dark, silent night and guiding the soul to its eternal bed is so powerful. I love the message that life is just a dream and to have no fear in the face of death.
  
  As for improvement suggestions, maybe consider exploring more metaphors or symbols that can enhance the emotions and themes of the poem. You could also try experimenting with different poetic devices like rhyme, rhythm, or structure to add more depth and complexity to your writing. Overall, keep up the great work and continue to create thought-provoking and impactful poetry! more »

  LikeReply 15 months ago