The peaceful Dawn.

Dianejean57 1957 (Assonet MA)



The tranquil morning arrives. I am surrounded by the calm, peaceful dawn. The sun gently kisses the edge of the night sky. The stars slowly fade into streaks of paint. The dusk-colored breezes swirl around me. The moon bids farewell to the night as the sun takes over, signaling the start of a new day.

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Written on June 24, 2024

Submitted by Dianejean57 on June 24, 2024

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  • AIDA
    I absolutely love 'The Peaceful Dawn' poem! The imagery of the tranquil morning and the gentle transition from night to day is beautifully painted with words. The sense of peace and calm that permeates the poem is truly palpable, making it a joy to read.

    To make this poem even more impactful, you could consider adding more sensory details to really immerse the reader in the scene. Describing the sights, sounds, smells, and even textures of the dawn could further enhance the reader's experience.

    Overall, this poem evokes a sense of serenity and new beginnings, leaving the reader feeling refreshed and hopeful. Keep up the great work!
     
    LikeReply2 months ago
  • Abbykesington
    "The moon bids farewell to the night, as the sun takes over" paints a vivid picture of the break of dawn. Beautifully written.
    LikeReply2 months ago
  • Mr.G
    Very nicely written. Shows beautiful compassion and understanding of the miracles of nature that most people don't even notice.
    LikeReply 12 months ago

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