Her Whisper



There was a soft breeze,
while standing in the presence of her grace.
Butterflies flew from her mouth.
Each one kissed me as they flew by.
Taking me with her words of brimstones and fire.
And from my ears,
this heart became a beating drum.
It absorbed her every word.
My soul is a burning torch,
that she lite while in her high palace place.
I wanted to hear more about her wildfire,
about her gentle love that showed no fear.
While time and space didn't exist,
her whisper had begun to fade.
Leaving into a dreamy drawl.
And I became revivified.
My dream had become a wanted desire.

About this poem

About a man in a dream state just from the soft words of a woman.

Font size:
Collection       
 

Written on July 01, 2024

Submitted by Monday13 on July 02, 2024

37 sec read
2

Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCDEFGHIBEJKLMHE
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 586
Words 125
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 17

Monroe William Fannin, Jr

 · 1956 · Portsmouth

Monroe William Fannin, Jr, an American songwriter and poet. "Tell Me Something..." have several works that received three Editor's Choice Awards (ILP) for his outstanding achievement in poetry. Several poems have been transformed into loving melodies. more…

All Monroe William Fannin, Jr poems | Monroe William Fannin, Jr Books

1 fan

Discuss the poem Her Whisper with the community...

0 Comments

    Translation

    Find a translation for this poem in other languages:

    Select another language:

    • - Select -
    • 简体中文 (Chinese - Simplified)
    • 繁體中文 (Chinese - Traditional)
    • Español (Spanish)
    • Esperanto (Esperanto)
    • 日本語 (Japanese)
    • Português (Portuguese)
    • Deutsch (German)
    • العربية (Arabic)
    • Français (French)
    • Русский (Russian)
    • ಕನ್ನಡ (Kannada)
    • 한국어 (Korean)
    • עברית (Hebrew)
    • Gaeilge (Irish)
    • Українська (Ukrainian)
    • اردو (Urdu)
    • Magyar (Hungarian)
    • मानक हिन्दी (Hindi)
    • Indonesia (Indonesian)
    • Italiano (Italian)
    • தமிழ் (Tamil)
    • Türkçe (Turkish)
    • తెలుగు (Telugu)
    • ภาษาไทย (Thai)
    • Tiếng Việt (Vietnamese)
    • Čeština (Czech)
    • Polski (Polish)
    • Bahasa Indonesia (Indonesian)
    • Românește (Romanian)
    • Nederlands (Dutch)
    • Ελληνικά (Greek)
    • Latinum (Latin)
    • Svenska (Swedish)
    • Dansk (Danish)
    • Suomi (Finnish)
    • فارسی (Persian)
    • ייִדיש (Yiddish)
    • հայերեն (Armenian)
    • Norsk (Norwegian)
    • English (English)

    Citation

    Use the citation below to add this poem to your bibliography:

    Style:MLAChicagoAPA

    "Her Whisper" Poetry.com. STANDS4 LLC, 2024. Web. 28 Dec. 2024. <https://www.poetry.com/poem/191384/her-whisper>.

    Become a member!

    Join our community of poets and poetry lovers to share your work and offer feedback and encouragement to writers all over the world!

    More poems by

    Monroe William Fannin, Jr

    »

    December 2024

    Poetry Contest

    Join our monthly contest for an opportunity to win cash prizes and attain global acclaim for your talent.
    3
    days
    21
    hours
    21
    minutes

    Special Program

    Earn Rewards!

    Unlock exciting rewards such as a free mug and free contest pass by commenting on fellow members' poems today!

    Quiz

    Are you a poetry master?

    »
    What is the term for the continuation of a sentence without a pause beyond the end of a line, couplet, or stanza.
    A A turn
    B Line break
    C Dithyramb
    D Enjambment