The Bond of a Fractured Mind



I recognize that pain,
The way your heart must hurt,
The sting of all it's cost you,
Misery from wounds - undeserved,

The past creeps up without a warning,
Breaks down your boundaries unannounced,
As you finally take a breath of solitude,
You close your eyes and your demons pounce,

As your walls come tumbling down,
I can feel that all too familiar ache,
I recognize the look of despair,
As you realize you're about to break,

When what you've worked so hard to keep inside,
Ruptures - and comes pouring out,
Your tears represent the breakage as they fall,
Until you're empty - inciting drought,

But your stubborn - strong - and gentle heart,
Continues to push through,
Because somewhere deep inside you know,
A heart like mine will need you too,

You persevere,
Past every bruise,
Through every furious storm,
I've been exactly where you are,
Come - let my fire keep you warm,

See - some things we were made to share,
Other's sadness and anguish,
We're created to bear,

I can help you walk your path,
Remind you what it's like to laugh,
And you can help me stand back up,
Remind me that I'm strong enough,

The bond created by fractured minds,
Is one that's destined to last,
Through any sorrow or joy in the future,
Despite a dark and harrowing past,

Solidarity created - impossible to sever,
An unbreakable set of spirits,
An ally in any endeavor.

About this poem

This is a poem I wrote to encourage those struggling with any pain, but especially mental illness. I got through my worst years and on the other side, I get to use my pain to help others cope with theirs. There is a light at the end of the tunnel, and there is someone who has been where you are and survived. You are strong enough.

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Written on December 01, 2023

Submitted by nitsyrk18 on July 12, 2024

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Scheme XXAX XXXX XBCB XDXD XAXA XXEFE CXC XXXX XGFG FXF
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,357
Words 290
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 5, 3, 4, 4, 3

Krystin Patterson

 · 1992 · Reno, NV

I am 32 and from the PNW. I have a beautiful wife and 3 adorable feline boys. I have been an ECE teacher for 11 years, it is my passion. I love to write as a creative outlet, but also as a means to connect with others. Human emotion is sometimes hard to articulate, but I believe when you find someone else who describes feelings you didn't know there were words for, it can be a moment of healing for your soul. more…

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2 Comments
  • JokerGem
    I like the theme and the subject here.
    I do believe there is alot to be said about the bonds that form among those, as you aptly dub, ‘the fractured.’
    This is believable to anyone who’s been through the trials. 
    LikeReply3 months ago
    • nitsyrk18
      thank you! I hope to inspire those that are struggling to see the light at the end of the tunnel, even when it's so dark.
      LikeReply 13 months ago
    • JokerGem
      That is awesome!
      You have my support!
      LikeReply 13 months ago
  • kalinsteed
    Beautiful
    LikeReply3 months ago
    • nitsyrk18
      Thank you so much!
      LikeReply3 months ago

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