Moving On
Neither here nor there
in between lives, in between cities
the gentle rocking of the train
seems at odds with the fluster
of the spectral display
streaking past the window
like a Renoir painting
Leaving you, leaving my life
the passing of our journey together
leaves me smudged and bruised
like the mortal daylight at the window
suspended between was and will be
belonging to neither one
As the eyelid of darkness
flutters over the earth
squeezing the life from the sky
endings become beginnings
and certainty becomes fear
as blackness hurtles to earth
like a jailers door
About this poem
The end of a relationship
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Written on August 11, 2024
Submitted by timo.43812 on August 10, 2024
Modified by timo.43812 on August 10, 2024
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Quick analysis:
Scheme | XXXAXBX XAXBXX XCXXXCX |
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Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 576 |
Words | 102 |
Stanzas | 3 |
Stanza Lengths | 7, 6, 7 |
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