Flawless Without Fault



Whoa oh say,
Can it be.
Birds heard chirping harmoniously.
High in the air.
Chirping joyously in the trees.

Yet below are witnessed conflicts.
And arguments spewed endlessly.
Among the people who pretend,
They are Christians evil free.

Whoa oh say this is imagined.
And not reality.
Since this must be a test,
That humans beings pass easily.

'Such a positive and wholesome message.
Although deluded it may be.
And flawless without fault.
Tell me honestly.
What is this new discovery you take?
Used to medicate your vision to fiction,
Away and kept to distance,
The witnessing to observe...
Bees buzzing and the chirping of birds?
Are you drugged and used,
As an experiment?
Or...
Have you purposely lost your mind.
Hoping to never find it again!'

'How many pennies make one dollar?'

'That doesn't make sense!'

'Exactly.
Yet...
Nothing these days do.
Although people will do their best,
To try and keep their ignorance...
As a way of life to defend and pretend,
They represent a future.
Accepting opinions and a togetherness,
Free of lies and deception to deny it.'

'That's not true.
Every argument I have ever had.
I had eventually been forgiven,
For admitting to be wrong.
After starting a fight,
To keep my entitled right to do it!'

'Just how stupid can that belief be?'

'Hey...
Aren't we all citizens of America?
With freedoms to premeditated,
A doing as we please.
Then hopefully be forgiven.
When we quote a scripture from a Bible.
To have it believed,
We are all Christians.
Excused to have lost our minds,
Temporarily?
Geeessshhh, come on.
Cut me some slack.
The people I know,
Have been taught to learn to expect that!'

'From where?
Their churches?'

'Exactly.
You must be psychic or clairvoyant
Which?'

'Me?
I'm an observer.'

'Oh.
You're one of those.
A visionary who claims to be able,
To witness a correctness disconnected,
From truth.'

'Whatever.
But this I will admit,
Being a hypocrite amongst others...
Also hypocrites?
That, I am not!'
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Written on August 10, 2024

Submitted by lpahtillah on August 10, 2024

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Scheme abbcd xbeb xbfb xbxbxghxxxijxx j x Bxkfhejxl kxgxxl b axmdgnxxxbxxox cx Bix bj oxnmx jlxxx
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,964
Words 422
Stanzas 15
Stanza Lengths 5, 4, 4, 14, 1, 1, 9, 6, 1, 14, 2, 3, 2, 5, 5

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