Black Void

Joaquim Fernandez 2007 (Conway AR)



While sitting her looking into the distance
All I see the sun slowly setting down
Below the called the horizon
Now looking into the never-ending black void

All I see is darkness nothing else around
I am paralyzed I can't move not even an inch
What is happening why can't I move or see
Is anyone out there please someone answer

All I here is outcries and screams for help
Like me waiting to finally be saved
I feel like I am getting stabbed over and over
Drowning in all my sorrow and pain

This must be a nightmare
Because I can't wake up
SOMEONE PLEASE HELP ME
I can't do this alone

Life cis constantly knocking me down
But I can't get up on my own
I need help please anybody
But there is no one around

Hello anyone out there
Please I'm begging wake me up
All I can see is darkness
Staring into the pitch black void

About this poem

Whenever I zone out I this is what I see

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Written on February 16, 2024

Submitted by nerf.kin88 on September 04, 2024

Modified by nerf.kin88 on September 12, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XAXB AXCD XXDX EFCG AGCA EFXB
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 824
Words 169
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4

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