Old school-love



In this age of screens, I seek old-school love,
Where eyes meet, letters speak, like stars above.
She's hidden, elusive, in the shadows she lies,
But when our gazes lock, our hearts do rise.

Her eyes, they blush, with secrets untold,
In their depths, mysteries and stories unfold.
I watch her, enraptured, as if time stands still,
Captivated by her essence, by her will.

On the car roof, we sit, under the night's embrace,
Sipping tea, lost in each other's grace.
She speaks, words flowing like a gentle stream,
But I'm lost in the melody of her voice, like a dream.

In this 21st century, amidst chaos and noise,
I find solace in her, my heart's true choice.
For in her, I've found a love so pure,
Old-school love, forever endure.

About this poem

Your poem explores the essence of timeless, genuine love amidst the modern world’s chaos. It contrasts the digital age's impersonal nature with a nostalgic longing for a deeper, more traditional connection. The imagery of shared moments under the night sky and the intimate exchange of glances and words highlight a romantic ideal that transcends contemporary distractions.

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Written on February 07, 2024

Submitted by Ml.sharmamanish222 on August 05, 2024

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Scheme AABB CCDD EEFF XXGG
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 733
Words 149
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4

Manish Kumar Sharma

 · 2001 · Greater Noida

23 old engineer living in Greater Noida, India more…

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