Untitled



You came to me like a stranger
eyes averted, head turned
staring into the cold distance
so that my joy fell as dust.
My kiss brushed against your skin
and I greeted you gently
as a prayer whispered in a tomb,
you left the echo for response.
I took your hands in my own
limp and cold like another’s
your acid tears on the harsh stone
wash away the glamour of our love
and mark you as one who seems not to know me,
you, who now punish me for my hopes.
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Written on September 12, 2024

Submitted by A_Starkiewicz on September 12, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCDEFGHICIJFK
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 452
Words 97
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 14

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  • delano
    Nice
    LikeReply1 month ago
  • KaylaBell
    This poem captured me immediately and kept me until the end.
    LikeReply3 months ago

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