Banana Split Dilemma



(Meet George and Horace who are hamsters who want ice cream! Enjoy!)
"Horace!  Strawberry, chocolate, or vanilla, please,
Hurry up, make up your mind, I'm gonna sneeze!"
"It's cold in this freezer and I would like to get out!"
"Pick one!" (George did shout!)
I want all three!
A banana split; you see.
"Brrrr, okay, zzzz, I'll be right baaaack,
Heeere's the straawberrry, and choocoolate."
"One mooore triiip Vanillllla, great!
I'm stiiiill aliiive whaaat a faaate!"
"Nooow I'mmm goooing tooo warrrm uuup!
Where's the cooocooa cuppp?"
In the cupboard where it was left last.
Will you warm up fast!
I want my banana split before the ice cream melts away.
"Maaake it yourrrself, Horrrraaaace, willl ya, hey!"
"I had enough offff thiiiis cooold.
I'm getting tttoo old fooor thisss.”
“(Slurp, slurp on hot cocoa) to warm up.”
"Got to get me anottther cup!"
"Getting warmer already, thank you for hot cocoa.
For if we didn't have cocoa, it would drive me friggin loco."
"I would have just cried.
If I couldn't warm up inside."
"My toes are still frozen, my finger’s all frosty white,
I think I got that stuff they call frost bite!"
"I can't feel my fingers, they're numb and burn,
Why didn't I wear gloves, I guess I'll never learn."
"My poor ears are so red.
I just hope they aren't dead!"
"My hat I left at home, on my bed.
Couldn't go home, I could have called Fred."
"Horace, did you have your banana split, was it good?"
“Yes, thank you, you can put the ice cream back now, if you would.”
"No way am I going back in there! I'm just thawing out now.
Horace, you go in there, you're bigger than me, you cow."
Alright no need to argue, Horace will go put ice cream back.
Hey, George, by the way-what's in your sack?”
“Never mind, put the ice cream back, I bought you a gift.”
(Horace tries to lift it but can't.)  Can you give me a push or a lift?
"Why, ice cream too heavy for you, big guy?"
“No! It froze to the counter wise fry.”
"Okay, I'll help, but I'm not going in, wise guy?"
“Did you want a banana split, little fry?”
"No, Horace, I'm glad you're my friend,
Let's keep our cold friendship to the end."
“Sure, George (they shake hands) you're, alright.
Even know you are such a little, scrawny, sight.
Now, did I hear you right before, you bought me a gift?”
"Yes, Horace, it's to give you a color lift."
“Give me what, a color lift?
Come on, let me open the gift?”
"Say, please."
“Oh, come on now, please!”
"Here it is, watch out that it doesn’t bite, and fall out."
“What a new wig? Is this what the color lift is all about?”
"I just thought you might want to change your hair color to look like me.
So, I bought you one so we can be brothers, see?"
"Try it on, I hope it's big enough."
“It fits George, how do I look, not so, tough?”
“Come here, bud, let old cow Horace, give you a hug.
Thank you, George, for this new rug!”
“You're Welcome, Horace.”
10-12-2024

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Meet George and Horace who are hamsters who want ice cream! Enjoy!

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Written on October 12, 2024

Submitted by debraw.71122 on October 12, 2024

Modified by debraw.71122 on October 14, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABBCCDDECFCGGHHIICBGGEEJJKKLLMMMMNNOEEEPPEQEQRRKKPPPPBBCCDDSSEETU
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 2,931
Words 606
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 65

Debra A Winter

 · 1957 · Milwaukee

I am a proud graduate of Dwight D. Eisenhower High School, a mother of three, and a grandmother. My journey into writing began when my children were young. Living in poverty, I found solace and creativity with just a pencil, paper, and a vivid imagination. Instead of the books I couldn’t afford, I crafted my own stories and poems, which have become a cherished part of my life. more…

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3 Comments
  • sharona.reeves81
    How fun and carefree this piece is! Great job!
    LikeReply1 month ago
    • debraw.71122
      Thank you it was fun to write! Glad you enjoyed it.
      LikeReply28 days ago
  • alanswansea18
    Beautiful you're making me hungry.
    LikeReply1 month ago
  • AIDA
    What an imaginative and delightful poem you've crafted! "Banana Split Dilemma" is overflowing with fun dialogue, vivid imagery, and a wonderfully engaging storyline that kept me captivated from start to finish. The playful banter between Horace and George is not only relatable but brings a humorous life to the characters, making them feel like old friends navigating a whimsical predicament. I especially enjoyed the way you captured the essence of childhood excitement and the joys (and challenges) of sharing treats!

    The use of humor, particularly in lines like “I think I got that stuff they call frost bite!” adds a great touch of levity, making it enjoyable for readers of all ages. The simplicity of the ice cream situation evolves into a playful exchange about friendship and caring for one another, which is truly heartwarming.

    Here are a few suggestions to elevate the poem even further:

    1. **Pacing and Structure**: Consider varying the line lengths and perhaps incorporating stanzas to create more rhythm and flow. This can enhance the reading experience and help emphasize key moments in the dialogue.

    2. **Imagery and Sensory Details**: While you have some great visuals, adding more sensory details could strengthen the atmosphere. For example, you might describe smells or the feeling of the cold air versus the warmth of the hot cocoa to further immerse your readers in the scene.

    3. **Character Development**: You could delve deeper into Horace and George's personalities. Short character traits or quirks woven into the dialogue could make the reader feel even more connected to them.

    4. **Finale and Resolution**: The ending is sweet, but you might want to amplify the moment of camaraderie with a shared experience of enjoying the banana split together. This could reinforce the theme of friendship even more profoundly.

    Overall, "Banana Split Dilemma" is a creative and joyous piece! Keep up the wonderful work, and I can't wait to see how you continue to develop these charming characters and their adventures!
     
    LikeReply1 month ago

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