The Dark Birds



The dark birds came,
I didn’t know their name.

They walked in Hebrew on the sand
so I’d understand.

They sang, the sea flowed,
though no one made a road.

I shivered on the shore
when the water closed its door.

Then as I felt the birds return
to me like ashes to an urn,

and sunlight warmed the stones,
fire undressed my bones.
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Submitted by kandra_b on October 29, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AA BB CC DD EE FF
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 335
Words 77
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2

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