When Love Turns Dark



A hollow cord stretched across the room
Vibrating with tension and a nervy loom
A tempest brewing, emotions choked and broken

The door creaks open as crackling bone
Saran wrap seals the sound, leaving whispers alone
The thicken air heavy with unspoken dread
A veil of caution, a sum of fear instead

It hangs like smoke, a silent scream
Conived in a idiotic chilling space
Heavy drapes, like mourners dressed in black
Witness the tragedy they can’t turn back
Groans, acrid and sharp, echo in the crime scene

Multiplying inside, a coercive twisted fight
Throated threats spits venom everywhere
A web of disgust and distrust is what did him
A ruptured stalk, a face contorted with an affair

These walls remember the echoes of the knife
Furniture crashing, bruises and pressure dressing
Muffled cries that pierce the commotion
Wondering reasons why; the erosion

Every door slam and it defaced ache
Stalls like bottles on a dust-filled shelf
Each one a threat, a danger to oneself
The coroner trails a muggy charcoaled bag
An intense, pale gaze over the shattered crag
The hash-tagged threat ensues

‘Cheating will be the death of you’

But in the autopsy, the tongue is removed bare
The murder was a fatal attraction, a twisted silent snare
The victim, an upshot yoked in a fierce wife-beat
Is the gaslighting storm rodded by her killer’s feet

About this poem

Written in tribute to Domestic Violence Awareness Month (October 2024) Inspired by "See the Stars" by Chris Malinchak

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Written on October 20, 2024

Submitted by Caleiph on November 20, 2024

Modified by Caleiph on November 20, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AAB CCDD XXEEX XFXF XXBB XGGXEX X FFHH
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,352
Words 235
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 3, 4, 5, 4, 4, 6, 1, 4

Caleiph Kenyon Brewer

 · 1977 · Berkeley, CA

Caleiph Kenyon Brewer is a community service advocate, veteran, artist and retired Army Human Resources Instructor. He is the author of "The Poetic Zeal" (2006) and "Afflatus Inbound: Rowing for Peace" (2024). Berkeley-Influenced with the self-described 'gangsta teaching' style; his work often explores themes of human experience, emotion, and the complexities of life. He has a collection of poems that reflect his unique voice and perspective, which resonates with readers seeking depth and insight in poetic expression more…

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