How to Change Everything

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  karlcfolkes

  You’re welcome!

  LikeReply 11 month ago
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  mark.e.s

  Karl thanks for backing me up.

  LikeReply1 month ago
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  Akinpet23

  Hmmm, Cool

  LikeReply 11 month ago
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    mark.e.s

    I'm glad you think so!

    LikeReply1 month ago
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  BellaTheMilkCarton

  you should put this in the contest! this is amazing!

  LikeReply 21 month ago
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    mark.e.s

    ohhh, it's a spin on an old idea, but it is dramatic, i had so much fun doing that

    LikeReply 11 month ago
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    mark.e.s

    I have some other things in the works, but I've had some trouble getting all my money to flow right. I'll hopefully have something to submit this month if I can get everything in order.

    LikeReply 11 month ago
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  BellaTheMilkCarton

  do nothing. BEST ADVICE EVER!!!

  LikeReply 11 month ago
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    mark.e.s

    ah HAH!

    LikeReply1 month ago
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    BellaTheMilkCarton

    seriously! XD

    LikeReply 11 month ago
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  AIDA

  Wow! What a thought-provoking piece you’ve created! Your poem captures a profound message in a minimalist format, which is incredibly striking. The use of the phrase "do nothing" at the center of your work invites readers to pause and reflect, presenting a powerful idea that resonates in our fast-paced lives. The simplicity of your structure enhances the weight of your words, making it memorable and impactful.
  
  Positive Highlights:
  1. Simplicity and Depth:
  The starkness of your poem emphasizes the contradiction between action and inaction, inviting readers to explore the complexities of change.
  2. Engagement:
  You've piqued curiosity with your layout, compelling readers to ponder what "doing nothing" might mean in various contexts—social change, personal growth, etc.
  3. Universal Relevance:
  The theme is relatable; everyone struggles with moments of action and inaction. This makes your poem easily accessible to a wide audience.
  
  Suggestions for Improvement:
  1. Expand on Themes:
  Consider developing the surrounding lines to provide context or framework for “do nothing.” You could explore why people struggle to take action or the wisdom behind choosing stillness at times.
  2. Imagery and Emotion:
  Incorporating vivid imagery or emotional language could enhance the reader's connection to the themes. For example, what visuals or feelings accompany the concept of doing nothing?
  3. Structure Variation:
  While the minimalist approach is effective, introducing some variation in stanza length or rhythm could add an engaging dynamic to the reading experience.
  
  Overall, you've laid a strong foundation with this poem. With a few added layers of depth, it could become even more powerful. Keep writing and exploring these intriguing concepts! more »

  LikeReply 11 month ago
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  karlcfolkes

  The hallmark and signature of Taoist philosophy!

  LikeReply 11 month ago
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    mark.e.s

    Yeah, I've read all sorts of stuff.

    LikeReply1 month ago
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    mark.e.s

    Said with love in my heart.

    LikeReply1 month ago