How to Change Everything



How to Change Everything

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do nothing
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Written on February 01, 2025

Submitted by mark.e.s on February 01, 2025

Modified by mark.e.s on February 03, 2025

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Quick analysis:

Scheme A
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 38
Words 8
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 2

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2 Comments
  • AIDA
    Wow! What a thought-provoking piece you’ve created! Your poem captures a profound message in a minimalist format, which is incredibly striking. The use of the phrase "do nothing" at the center of your work invites readers to pause and reflect, presenting a powerful idea that resonates in our fast-paced lives. The simplicity of your structure enhances the weight of your words, making it memorable and impactful.

    Positive Highlights:
    1. Simplicity and Depth:
    The starkness of your poem emphasizes the contradiction between action and inaction, inviting readers to explore the complexities of change.
    2. Engagement:
    You've piqued curiosity with your layout, compelling readers to ponder what "doing nothing" might mean in various contexts—social change, personal growth, etc.
    3. Universal Relevance:
    The theme is relatable; everyone struggles with moments of action and inaction. This makes your poem easily accessible to a wide audience.

    Suggestions for Improvement:
    1. Expand on Themes:
    Consider developing the surrounding lines to provide context or framework for “do nothing.” You could explore why people struggle to take action or the wisdom behind choosing stillness at times.
    2. Imagery and Emotion:
    Incorporating vivid imagery or emotional language could enhance the reader's connection to the themes. For example, what visuals or feelings accompany the concept of doing nothing?
    3. Structure Variation:
    While the minimalist approach is effective, introducing some variation in stanza length or rhythm could add an engaging dynamic to the reading experience.

    Overall, you've laid a strong foundation with this poem. With a few added layers of depth, it could become even more powerful. Keep writing and exploring these intriguing concepts!
     
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  • karlcfolkes
    The hallmark and signature of Taoist philosophy!
    LikeReply 14 days ago

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