Beneath the Surface



Beneath the Surface

I looked out through the window at you across the way
Thinking of our last words we shared, and how things ended that day
Who you and I once were, and all we use to do-
How things changed our relationship, which changed both me and you
Beyond both our reach; below it all,   the way we feel-
Above what is imaginable, towards something that is not real.
Even though we both looked hard for love........underneath,
throughout, between.... It lies beneath the surface
Somewhere inside that could not be seen.
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Submitted by Sheilak on January 09, 2016

Modified on May 02, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme A BBCCDDXAX
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 517
Words 94
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 1, 9

Sheila King

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