Back to You



The girl on the corner is flashing her legs.
The drunk at the station is down to the dregs.
I try not to answer each question that begs,
And I long for a train back to you.

The platform is crowded, with nowhere to sit.
It's dingy and draughty, and quite badly lit.
But I'll bide my time here and put up with it,
As I wait for a train back to you.

My nights have been empty without you to hold.
I've felt lost and lonely, if truth must be told;
And these city streets are not paved with gold,
So I'm taking a train back to you.

The man in the mirror is no friend of mine;
He's balding and puffy, and talks out of line.
He followed me here with a bottle of wine,
And we're boarding a train back to you!

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Copyright © Robert Haigh, 2019
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Submitted by RobertHaigh on June 22, 2020

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme AAAB CCCB DDDB EEEB X
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 736
Words 151
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 1

Robert Haigh

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  • Adroity
    Your verses paint a vivid picture of longing and nostalgia, capturing the essence of a journey back to a loved one. The imagery of the bustling platform and the inner turmoil reflected in the mirror creates a poignant contrast. The yearning for connection and the symbolic train ride back to the one who brings solace and comfort is beautifully expressed in your words. It's like each step and each moment is a part of the path leading back to that cherished destination, where the heart finds its home. Your poetic journey beautifully conveys the emotions of separation and the anticipation of reuniting with a loved one. 
    LikeReply5 months ago
  • jackg.26131
    a good use of repetition here easy to relate to a good poem
    LikeReply5 months ago

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