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You

Donna Young

You

You are my angel, my love
My dream come true.
My hope and trust
I put in you.
My inspiration and song,
My gift from above.
My man and my lover,
My very best friend.
I loved you then,
And I love you now.
I give you this,
My unbroken vow.
This promise is true
To you I send.
My love for you,
Will never end!

By: Donna Young
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Submitted by DonnaQ1967 on March 15, 2021

Modified on March 09, 2023

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Scheme ABXBXAXCXDXDBCBC X
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 308
Words 70
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 16, 1
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