after seeing you



After seeing you, my lonely life of bitterness suddenly changed into bliss,
The bright eyes and fresh smile ofyours make inanimates spring to life,
So is your beauty, my love,
I am writing this to honor you !
Don't need no esoteric words, no grammar ,
nor do i need any rythm structure,
I know deep inside, you are breathing through my writing
Just glimpses of you put me in solace,
I reach the ultimate height of bliss again and again,
Your smiles are flowers colorfully blooming,
And your white face is the sun that gives me warmth!
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 26, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCDEEFAGFH
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 524
Words 96
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 11

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