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Awake inside a sleeping body

Taleshia G MCcray

It get later and later as
time goes by laying in bed
with two crying eyes sad thought
flow through my mind.
I'm thinking about you all night
long. I'm talk to God what did
i do worring. Was it worring to
love you? I'm still in love with
you very much.
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Submitted on January 15, 2010

Modified on April 04, 2023

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Scheme ABCDEFGHI
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 243
Words 52
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 9
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