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Bathroom Floor

Rebecca Acosta

Atop you they lay
these hands, these limbs, these feet
a sluggish meat
is wasting away
your chill, your stiffness sleeps

Against you they stay
this neck, this back, these cheeks
eyes that speak
with nothing to say
and no known beat to keep
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Submitted on May 10, 2012

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABBAX AXXAX
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 230
Words 44
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 5, 5
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