Battle Scars



The silver sharpness glided through my skin
I waited for the pain but none came
Tears of blood streamed down my wrist
I waited for the pain
But none came

Desperate to feel again
But no emotion burst forward
No feeling

The silver sharpness glided through my skin
I waited for the pain
I waited
I waited
It came
Feeling of relief
Emotions felt
How glorious
I smiled to myself
Amused at my sick humour

Realized as to how much you've changed me
For the better?
Or for the worse?

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Submitted on October 15, 2013

Modified on March 06, 2023

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4

Quick analysis:

Scheme AbxCb cxx ACDDbxxxxe xex
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 454
Words 90
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 5, 3, 10, 3

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