Deep Bliss



Let me take u back in time , rewind when u were mine
 Fast fwd in my mind wondering what the heck went wrong
Try'n 2 look 4 the answers i just can't seem 2 find
One moment ur here , another passes & ur gone
Forever u will always be the girl i took 2 prom
Sitting next 2 me, it felt like US was more than destiny
U & Me meant 2 be a feeling better than ecstasy
Now a days u don't even mention me

Remember when U use 2 question me?
Vice versa in the way i use 2 see
Eventually we had 2 end
The love we had...was it pretend?
What would of been, could of been
I should of been your everything
But now i'm just like any friend
I don't regret we ever happened
At times it feels we never happened
I'm trapped in RAPN poetry with action
As i imagine back when
My wordz 2 U were so attracting

Today, who am i kidding if I C U i'll be speechless
I'm traveling these words 2 U, but they seem reach-less
Now how can i defeat thiz...memory of each-kiss
Of these-lips, 7 minutes up in a deep-bliss
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Submitted on November 06, 2009

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme XXXXXAAA AABBCDBEECCD XXFF
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 960
Words 205
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 8, 12, 4

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