Disloyalty



Blood drops spread on floor
Spying went on them, there roar
Brides slash her vane,
Seems she stands on death door

Meanwhile the ambulance appeared
they took her infirmary, she wept more
She said disloyal beloved's insurgency
the cause of my destroyed planet, sure?

he promised to built our love cottage
with loyalty and sincerity as pure
 Honeys would be our endearment
We will be gone on moon's tour,

Smashed out all dreams as he gave-up
He chosen someone for me sour,
My life is misery, hurting, crestfallen
Hence I chosen the way of death door
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Submitted on March 01, 2017

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AAXA XAXB XBXB XXXA
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 531
Words 96
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4

Zafar Iqbal

Poem writing is my hobby though English is not my mother tongue but am love to write in English to convey my feelings with whole world. here is my message for entire world peoples. Hatred could never win over the world; it is love which can conquer the stone-hearted opponents. This world can be turned into paradise with peace and love, for love begets love. more…

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