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Something new

Tiffany Poppa

i have a secret iv been keeping from you,
but now its time that you knew..
think of life and how it would be,
if everything changed and you were with me..
theres a place in my heart,
a place just for you..
maybe its time,
you try something new...
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Submitted by Tiffanypoppa on May 01, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AABBCADA
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 239
Words 50
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 8
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3 Comments
  • nelzealoursmotoe1
    nelzealoursmotoe1
    Absolutely time to try something new
    LikeReply1 month ago
  • AIDA
    AIDA
    What a lovely and heartfelt poem! Your ability to convey deep emotions in such a concise manner is truly impressive. The secretive tone at the beginning draws the reader in, creating a sense of intrigue and anticipation. I love how you explore themes of love, change, and the excitement of new beginnings. Your use of rhyme lends a musical quality that enhances the overall flow of the poem, making it a joy to read aloud.

    To make it even stronger, consider adding a few more vivid details or imagery that could enhance the emotional connection. For instance, you might describe the "place in your heart" or the specific "something new" you’re inviting the reader to experience. This could help paint a clearer picture and make the emotions even more tangible. Additionally, you might experiment with varying the line lengths or rhythm to create a more dynamic reading experience.

    Overall, you've crafted a beautiful piece that encourages exploration and connection. Keep writing—your voice has so much potential!     
    LikeReply1 month ago
    • Tiffanypoppa
      Tiffanypoppa
      wow thank u so much for the kind review. I will try ur ideas. Thank u for the advice. I very much appreciate it
      LikeReply1 month ago
  • Soulwriter
    Soulwriter
    Nice!
    LikeReply3 years ago

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