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	Throughout I felt as I were that child 1 day ago	View
	This piece stands out because it combines technical skill with deep emotional resonance, delivering a narrative of pain, strength, and forgiveness that is universally relatable. It’s not just a poem—it’s a testament to survival and resilience. more » 15 days ago	View
	Nice metaphor. Our liberties, much like the egg are very fragile 16 days ago	View
	The precursor to this epic series is the 4 part Epic of Man. I will try to release the other parts of The Epic of Tribes every Friday. Also there is The Truth Beneath the Feast which is a bit of an introduction for the stories of the Indigenous tribes. I hope you enjoy them all more » 18 days ago	View
	Love how this portrays how nature will endure even in the harshest of conditions. Is this also a metaphor for your own journey? 18 days ago	View
	I hope you find the other parts of this epic equally as amazing 19 days ago	View
	Consciousness is indeed deeper than philosophy can fathom 20 days ago	View
	stay tuned for a 17 part Epic. "Epic of Tribes" 21 days ago	View
	Confronting what you fear is the first step to letting go 22 days ago	View
	I have been on many of these street to finally find the right road towards fulfillment 22 days ago	View
	Your cleverness is amazing. That poor guy will be left with quite a limp now that one leg is longer than the other 22 days ago	View
	You have given us a glimpse into you souk. 24 days ago	View
	Nicely done 1 month ago	View
	No training can fully prepare 1st responders for what you might face. Thank you for your service 1 month ago	View
	Such a heartfelt moving piece 1 month ago	View
	The interplay of light and darkness mirrors the creative process how inspiration often emerges from contrasting thoughts, emotions, or experiences. The "memory of light" appears to symbolize fleeting moments of inspiration, while the "touch of pure darkness" represents the struggle or introspection that fuels deeper creativity. more » 1 month ago	View
	We all have the responsibility to speak up for those who's voices often go unheard 1 month ago	View
	Brings me back to my childhood and simpler times where all we had to worry about was a secure rung I the ladder or the sturdy floor boards. Let's not forget how mom would yell or names for suppa 1 month ago	View
	I can relate to this. It captures a deeply resonant and complicated relationship dynamic. The rawness and honesty reveals a tug-of-war between love and pain, vulnerability and self-protection. It’s as if love and hurt are locked in an endless dance, where moments of closeness and understanding slip into cycles of unintentional cruelty. It’s beautiful yet bittersweet, capturing the complexities of a love that’s both magnetic and potentially destructive. more » 1 month ago	View
	No I am not married. If a Christine ever comes along I just might. 1 month ago	View
	I thought I was fully prepared for what I was about to encounter, especially after reading one of your other poems. Alas I was greatly mistaken! I stood ready to dive into another whimsical piece BUT..... I could not make it past the first stanza with a gut-wrenching laugh. THANK YOU I much enjoyed and need this. Which breed did you finally settle on? more » 1 month ago	View
	You are one that needs no make up. Not for self, nor or reflection. You are true to yourself on both form and function 1 month ago	View
	this piece will also be in a book I am working on in spirituality I am glad it has resonated with you on such a deep level 1 month ago	View
	Grounded expectations is all we can hope for. Even with some of my works, often I will ask myself, why? We can only hope that one particular pieces resonates with someone. Bite your tongue on the 4th stanza cause we can agree to disagree. more » 1 month ago	View
	thank you. Ibwas having fun writing this and challenging myself. Somehow I kept being reminded of Anabel Lee 1 month ago	View