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I have always scribbled notes down about my thoughts, even in the dark hours of a morning, using a pen and pad beside the bed. Whether it was a line of code fixing a software program, or an appealing piece of lyrical verse for a new poem. My latest note for the start of a rhyme was "I smelt the smelts", after the wife complained about the smelts I was cooking, but no complaints from the dog. A poem about the smell of seafood cooking will follow later. Having a cynical attitude and a sense of irony, helps me navigate through a World we have made complicated through: Religions, societies, empires, democracies, dictatorships, organizations, companies, communities, schools of philosophies, and economic systems. Upon reflection I actually believe that writing a software program and writing a poem take on the same mental structure, I use the same methodology for each. Get an idea or be provided a specification, plan out the task, write the task, test (rewrite) the task until satisfied with the end result. As a semi-retired software developer and web-site designer, my verse compositions have been an enjoyable change of pace (no deadlines to face). My poetry verses are my poetic expressions of my observations of nature (which many people ignore), and their poetic nature convey my humour and empathy with my surroundings, from the sea, to the earth, to the cosmos, and all life-forms therein (including those in other worlds). My habitat is in Ontario, Canada (Lat. 43.4500° N, Lon. 80.4833° W). I will publish here examples of my endeavors in rhyming poetry writing, and I present these poems free of any great pretensions, especially in comparison to "my inspirational poets": Thomas Hardy, Alfred Lord Tennyson, James H. Knight-Adkin, Rupert Brooke, William Blake, Edward Lear, Dylan Thomas, and A. E. Housman. My poetry sometimes seems to exceed my expectations, but I then read the great poets for a reality check.

  July 2021     6 months ago

Submitted Poems 11 total

Vanity

Vanity, we play your game,
Age is passing by,
Furtive glances,
Touching chances,
Youth now tempts a try.

Mini skirts and sexy clothes,
Blemishes no more,
Uplifted tits,
Hide saggy bits,
Youth again restore.

Single bars and places,
...

by Kiwi Dave

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added 6 months ago
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Irrational

An irrational ex.

Empty life,
no control,
witch-craft,
lost soul,
Tarot cards,
Lotto hope,
faith is gone,
how to cope,
drifting wind,
freedoms mate,
think not,
cry fate,
lucky charms,
numbers up,
logic out,
give me...

by Dave Johnstone

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added 7 months ago
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DON'T

Don’t

Don’t look back,
Take the forward track,
There’s tragedies far worse.
In the news
Someone’s paid his dues,
Ending up in a hearse.

Don’t look down,
Get rid of that frown,
Fighting spirits emerge.
When compared,
To a problem...

by KiwiDave

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added 7 months ago
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Bored Time

Maybe I'm not poetry in motion
I write poetry to fill mind gaps when in stagnation
I hate my mind being in this almost empty void
It makes me feel quite annoyed
I could fill time gaps with household chores
That will earn me some wifely scores
...

by Dave Johnstone

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added 11 months ago
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Bar Chatter

Bar banter can be strange
When in a vocal exchange
Especially after a few beers
When drinking with your peers
Thinking What is this type of chatter
While the mind adjusts to the subject matter.

A dialogue will be a joint activity
In which...

by Dave Johnstone

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added 1 year ago
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I like this piece as a lot of it makes sense, in my life. Nicely written and clear thoughts. Well done

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