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  April 2023     7 months ago

Submitted Poems 2 total

Echoes of Desolation

In the shadows of my mind, I dwell alone,
Where the weight of despair has overthrown,
Every glimmer of hope, each ray of light,
In this endless, desolate, internal night.

A heavy shroud of darkness, thick as tar,
Binds my soul, and it feels...

by Donald123

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The Face Of Sadness

It's happened again.

The moment when I thought nothing would go wrong,
That everything would be alright,
That there was nothing to worry about,
That everything was perfect.

But just like those other times,
It didn't last.
Another moment...

by Donald

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Thank you! What are some examples of the imagery that resonated with you? Can you give me more examples of how to improve?

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