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  September 2023     4 months ago

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Regrets

By Chris Commodore © 2024

Oh, wasted time on juice inebriating;
Draining health and vital organs smashing,
Erasing moments soon to dry the sunshine,
Thus, dashing precious hours down the line.

Vain enjoyment down life’s littered lane,
...

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The Maid of the Week

By Chris Commodore © 2024

What will life be remembered for?
Perhaps humdrum and chit-chat,
I doubt anything more.
On Sundays I get up and go to church,
And sit and doze upon the lurch.

On Monday, I must go to work.
On Tuesday, I must go...

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MeeK Soul

By Chris Commodore © 2024

Meek soul I am.
I’ll wait for you;
No, wait on you.
Always, I’ll serve.
When your spirit fades,
I’ll be here forever.
Wherever transplanted;
Yes here, there, everywhere,
Where you’ve killed off your brother,
...

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Ammunition Soup

By Chris Commodore©2024

Put all the bombs in one big vat,
And let that spell the end of that.
To fill the opportunist’s scoop,
Let’s melt all guns and make a soup.

Make ammunition tasty bread,
The scattered shells to tasty cakes;
Fried...

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Now in Motion

By Chris Commodore©2023

Inside and outside,
Downside and up;
Glide like a landslide,
Slow down, don’t stop.

Right turn not left turn;
Forward not back.
Fly like the black turn,
Leading the pack.

Whirring and spinning,
Frugal with...

– by Chris Commodore

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Somewhat succinct in composition ...

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Your observations are correct and accepted. However, the poem "What's In A Name" was supposed to be in acrostic format, but there does not seem to be accommodation for such types of poems. In some of my submitted poems, I am expecting the reader to come to certain conclusions in matters of how the poem has been presented. "America?" in the referenced poem is meant to force the reader to evaluate social naming conventions and possible repercussions relative to acceptance and upward mobility in American society. 

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Mainly for it poetic markings ... like meter and rhyme, but especially for the reference it makes to the deep mysteries of creation.

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