Analysis of My Wish



I am envious to wind.
It touches you.
It kisses you.
Never waits for your kind.

I am envious to sunlight.
It brightens your complexion.
It warms you
as if it is it's birth right.

I am envious to rain.
It showers on you.
Wets your every parts
but I only gaze in vain.

I am envious to flower,
when you smell,
it kisses your lips
if you take near.

I am envious to butterfly.
It can sit on your brest
to suck verdure.
I want to be so sly.

I know I am unfortunate.
I wish to take birth
as natural phenomenon or inferior soul
to change my fate.


Scheme ABBA CXBC DBXD EXXX FXEF XXXX
Poetic Form
Metre 1110011 1101 1101 101111 1110011 1101010 111 1111111 1110011 11011 111001 1110101 11100110 111 11011 1111 11100110 111111 111 111111 11110100 11111 1100010101001 1111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 515
Words 110
Sentences 16
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 68
Words per stanza (avg) 18
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Submitted by swarup on July 07, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Swarup Bhattacharya

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