Analysis of Dinosaur Standing on Quicksand

Gisela Vigil 1959 (Cuba)



What’s this I hear about  
generational curses
to reverse and undo?
Glossy banners riding on
waves of change,
held by many who are
unaware they are
still standing at the start line
of a race that hasn’t begun.

What is this curse they speak of?
Is it a trait that parents pass down
to offspring,
much like trees producing fruits
that are the same?
Or is it an act or pattern
that keeps repeating
from generation to generation?
And why is it so horrible
that it is called a curse?

Could it be that what they call
a generational curse
is what I know as
heredity and traditions?
Something they want to extinguish.
Something I want to hold on to.
I’m starting to feel like
a dinosaur standing on quicksand.


Scheme XXAXXBBXC XXDXXXDCXE XEXXXAXX
Poetic Form
Metre 011101 010010 101001 1010101 111 111011 0111 1101011 1011101 1111111 110111011 11 1110101 1101 11111110 11010 10101010 01111100 111101 1111111 001001 11111 01000010 10111010 10111111 110111 0101011
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 726
Words 149
Sentences 11
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 9, 10, 8
Lines Amount 27
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 185
Words per stanza (avg) 43

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Guess I’ve become my grandmother.

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Submitted by Giselavigil on January 04, 2024

Modified by Giselavigil on January 04, 2024

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Gisela Vigil

Thank you for welcoming me to this community. I was born in Cuba but emigrated with my family to the US when I was three. I am mother to three young adults now, and also a grandmother. I’ve been writing for years, some I share, others I still keep in my personal file. I often write of struggles for we all face them as we journey through life. But still, I feel peace knowing I try my best. Feel blessed to have been given the gift of writing which I strive to improve cause there’s always room for growth. more…

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