Analysis of O,God,bless me.



My every hope is like sand castle.
They are washed away by the strong waves,pouncing on the beach.
and I stay in  hopeless condition.

When shooting stars are showered.
I close my eyes and wish
but like shooting stars,
my wishes are sunk into deep black sky.

My destiny is like the ship,
facing thunder strom
and sail spliting strong wind
which has lost its direction.

O,God,bless me,
to remove my doomed fate,
like the sun light,
removes the dark night.


Scheme XXA XXXX XXXA XXBB
Poetic Form
Metre 1100111110 111011011101 011010010 1101110 111101 11101 1101101111 11001101 10101 01111 1111010 11 101111 1011 01011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 473
Words 104
Sentences 8
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 3, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 89
Words per stanza (avg) 21
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