Analysis of Mindful Sailing



Sailing the ocean contains bravery.
I’m enjoying every moment,
Like food, savory.

What if I find
A storm, a shipwreck, or pirates?
If not for God’s help I’d lose my mind.

When listening to conch shells
All I hear is the ocean,
Like my mind glued to the oven and its smells.

The oven has pizza, cooking,
The rising crust, the melting cheese, the bubbling Sauce, and all over the yacht is me looking.


Scheme AXA BXB CXC DD
Poetic Form
Metre 1001001100 101010010 11100 1111 01010110 111111111 1100111 1111010 11111010011 01011010 01010101010010110011110
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 407
Words 85
Sentences 6
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 2
Lines Amount 11
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 77
Words per stanza (avg) 19
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Submitted by RonaldBunch on May 04, 2024

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Ronald Bunch

Ronald Bunch is a dedicated and passionate writer with a deep love for the art of poetry, science fiction, and fantasy. He’s committed to his Catholic faith and his work. Ronald's interests span a wide range, including writing, reading, social media, weight lifting, and riding an exercise bike. He’s on a journey to become a published author. He's writing a new book, he will seek an agent and traditional publication for it. He did volunteer work at Kids Food Basket, and Habitat for Humanity. He loves pizza and cats. His upbringing in Catholic schools and his birthplace in Grand Rapids, Michigan, USA, in 1982, have also shaped who he is today. more…

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