All about her



the beauty in her eyes,
some see the brown  
& escape towards a blue sky
while i see a fermented ground awaiting to spread
love through every bit of life.
she holds a glow which glistens into your soul
like diamonds under a summer's day

I imagine the sweetness of her laughter
delighting caterpillars to molt into butterflies
I imagine her eyes swooning your cup of tea
with its honey colored natures.

I imagine the ocean getting jealous of how she greets
The shores with her toes & turns away without a goodbye
For the Gentle breeze that courses along the currents of the ocean
Takes a sample of her perfection as the gusts sways past her soft hair
she walks so elegantly how is one not to fall in love?

For my dearest,
All that i am is a mere explanation of your magnificence
The energy which emits within my soul
Is a divine power source indulged by the river which courses through your veins,
For your heartbeat is a rhythmic melody which seduces me into a never ending trance
while your whispers travel throughout the shadows of the lost
& constructs what was a vague house into a serene place
with a picketed fence , blue shutters, & a yellow door which draws out your warmth.
you're my everything forever more

to be continued

About this poem

In depth tour of a young man’s perspective whilst being in love

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Written on November 25, 2022

Submitted by Wallysworld on November 25, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AXBXXCX XAXX XBXXX XACXXXXXX X
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,244
Words 245
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 7, 4, 5, 9, 1

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  • johnarau_a
    I actually enjoyed it . It’s sad hoe people with a sound mentality & well spoken never get the person
    LikeReply1 year ago

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