Deep Loyalty



My wife is my queen
I have eyes for no other lady
Rub her feet after working
Make her something to eat
In the mornings
Say something sweet
When she feeling unlucky
I used to sweep her off her feet
Without even trying
Nobody knows LOVE like me
What UNCONDITIONALLY really means
She could do anything
Even cheat on me
She could even leave me for somebody
And come back in a week
And I'd still be waiting
She can punch me burn me
Throw things break things
Yes she can be mean
Believe me
But I love it when she's happy
That means everything to me
Dancing and singing me some country
Laughing together watching TV
Tells me about everything
Cuz I am the one friend listening
Protect her from anything
Even her own family
Il be damed somebody hurts my baby
But when we fight each other
It's like guns and swords
All out wars
Spit venomous words
Things that really hurt
And we both don't deserve
And it only gets worse
The more I love her
The more I suffer

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A very complicated relationship but an undying loyalty

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Written on February 15, 2023

Submitted by Cursid1 on October 13, 2023

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