Garden of Eden



Garden of Eden
I walked in the Garden of Eden today,
just a half-mile from a surf town off Hwy 1.
It felt akin to a Greek epoch—
Poseidon’s village nestled before the gateway to the underworld.
Ravens conspired, animals lay in full skeletons,
awaiting divine decree—a sight unfamiliar to most.
There, the ocean moved slower,
and the green tree of life stood solitary—
knowledge abounding, equally dead as alive.
An eerie peace enveloped the air—
quieter than silence.
A woman jogged in the distance,
gone at a second glance.
A man sped by on a bike,
knees reaching over the handlebars,
dust billowing behind him.
A 1940s plane flew overhead one moment,
vanished the next—
another fallen victim to the immortal stronghold I found myself in.
This place once thrived as a bustling radio station,
now abandoned, covered in graffiti—
marks of others who passed on.
The doors to the derelict building are grand and frayed,
branded with the deer and phoenix.
"Show me the way, Kali," written on a browned paper,
hung by a rusty nail—
Inside, hundreds of offerings and wishes line the walls and cover the floors,
perhaps to grant wishes or acknowledge the departed.
Maybe attempts to petrify loved ones in the unforgiving thief of time,
In a place I fear death has no foe.

About this poem

The poem I am submitting, titled Garden of Eden, seeks to capture the essence of a deserted surf town off Highway 1, a place that resonated with me as if it were a mythical realm or the ends of the world. In this town, the remnants of civilization and outdated human tele-communication stations mingle with the timeless forces of nature. Drawing from personal experiences and observations, I attempt to evoke the sense of wonder and awe that enveloped me as I wandered through this hauntingly beautiful landscape.  

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Written on June 25, 2023

Submitted by abigail.rmaley on April 18, 2024

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Scheme ABCDEFGHIJKLLMNOPQRSAITUVHWXYZ1
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,280
Words 244
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 31

Abigail Maley

I am a passionate writer and journalist driven by curiosity and a relentless pursuit of untold stories. My academic background in Journalism and International Relations has equipped me with the tools to explore and uncover hidden narratives across the globe. However, it is through poetry that I find a unique method to express the beauty and mystery of places that may not have traditional stories present, yet possess an undeniable allure. more…

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