jn.selvadurai
  Bronze Member

Your hearfelt loss conveyed to us so beautifully. Thank you for sharing.

Great imagination and imagery transporting us to a colourful era of the past. Thank you.

The power of a poet and poetry beutifully captured. Congratulations.

Great effort. Well done. Be strong and keep going.

The pain and then the highs and lows well captured. Thank you for sharing. Be strong.

Thank you for your early vote and appreciating the message from the voice.

Thank you for voting for this poem John. Yes it is a common question many of us ponder.

An ultimate tribute to a resilient and loving father who faced the horrors of war, both on the battlefield and within himself.
Trauma, healing, parent-child bond and sacrifice beautifully captured through vivid imagery and rhyme. Great theme. Well done. more »

A very powerful message with strong imagery. Thank you for doing your bit.

thank you Steven for your appreciation and the wonderful insights on the poem.

Thank you Steven for your appreciation and the wonderful insights on this poem. Yes truest wisdoms are gathered through journeying process.

Thank you Anne. Welcome to this poetic community.

An emotional message. Graphic imagery of a difficult past.

A poem close to nature. Such positive imagery. Thank you.

Concise message with such simplicity and rhyme. Thank you.