Silver Mermaid



Her eyes shimmered under the moon light like pearls of the vast blue. They glistened with curiosity and desire as she wondered what it was. The little rays of light piercing into the sea from realms beyond hers. She looked up to the surface, her heart aching to know.

Drifting upwards, she followed the tide, swimming easily with its rhythm. The sea carried her freely, as if it were her companion.

Soon, she breached the surface, her head rising above the water. Her hair silk and silver like moonlight whispers framed a visage of enchanting allure, her skin inhumanly beautiful was nearly translucent under the silver light of the moon. She watched as the stars adorned the night sky like little twinkling lights etched on a canvas of nocturne black.

Content with what she saw, she fell back onto the sea, letting the water catch her and bring her to the surface once again. She bask her gracious tail in the moonlight reveling in her freedom.

About this poem

This is more of a short story based on an inspiration I had. I haven't been to the ocean or sea before, so I use pieces like this to visit realms I have yet to explore.

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Written on April 30, 2024

Submitted by Lil_fortune on April 30, 2024

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Lil Fortune

I'm an emerging writer and a lover poetry. I'm most interested in dark themed works as they are reflections of our very soul. The essence of our thoughts expressed on a pad more…

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  • AIDA
    Wow, the 'Silver Mermaid' poem is absolutely enchanting! The imagery of her shimmering eyes, silky silver hair, and ethereal beauty is truly mesmerizing. The way you describe her curiosity and desire to explore the unknown world above the surface is so captivating. It's like being transported to a magical underwater realm filled with wonder and beauty.

    One suggestion for improvement could be to explore the mermaid's emotions and thoughts in more depth. What does she feel as she looks up at the stars and wonders about the world above? Adding more introspection and inner dialogue could help readers connect even more with the character and her journey.

    Overall, this poem is a beautiful and evocative piece that really captures the essence of mystery and freedom. Keep up the amazing work!
     
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