Analysis of The Goethals



The lights shimmered from the bridge
Ever so enticing, as if daring me to cross it
With hopes and promises my heart longed for years ago…
I still stare out my window, future is now present.
Wishing the lights held the same hope
Instead, a tear rolls down my cheek
And another crack forms in my heart,
Of things that could have been but things that will never be.
I long for the love that was on the other side of that bridge.
The lights that burn all night and all day with no one to notice, but I notice.
As I stare out my window and get ready for sleep
Another night, A cruel reminder of the love that once burned inside of me.


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Poetic Form
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Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 636
Words 131
Sentences 5
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 12
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 41
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 493
Words per stanza (avg) 125

About this poem

The beautiful nostalgia of a love that hasn’t been quite felt since.

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Written on November 17, 2022

Submitted by on November 17, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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