Analysis of When I Write
When I write, I write with a vision full of Confliction. Stunted by the fact I've been living the way I've been living,
But listen i put love and pain in my vision
Cause that's all I saw before my vision .
Before it was nothing but confliction, eviction, and addiction
My vision isn’t just any vision, its a vision that’ll have me in commission,
That’ll lead me to an addiction, but not just any addiction an addiction to ambition
Even with all the confliction that had me in a position
Where my vision wasn’t an exception.
When I write I don’t just write I write with expression and have a personal connection with each word that’s being used to have a connection with the person who is trying to release their personal expectations.
When I write I don't see the word itself but its definition And how strong the connection is to my past conflictions.
My play on English words doesn’t meet with the standard expectation, but with that being said My Vision has a lot of complications because it has me to often times looking ahead instead of looking where to step.
But my Vision isn’t just any vision its a vision
that’ll release me from my past connections
that have me under a lot of depression
this vision is what will save me from my depression this vision doesn’t only involve me but my fellow brethren since we all fell for the same Idealistic prison.
This vision is what will free us from being held captive from people who’ve been moving on us with such precision. It’s not just my vision anymore but the vision of the new generation of children
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Characters | 1,588 |
Words | 300 |
Sentences | 9 |
Stanzas | 7 |
Stanza Lengths | 3, 5, 1, 1, 1, 4, 1 |
Lines Amount | 16 |
Letters per line (avg) | 77 |
Words per line (avg) | 18 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 177 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 41 |
About this poem
This poem comes from my heart and it really spoke to me when I wrote and read it over and over it just showed me more of myself then I could myself. It tells a story that I've came a long way from where i was before and well I've felt trapped at some point and well I grew up from the person I once was
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Written on May 14, 2022
Submitted by E.Aguilar on July 23, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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