Analysis of Pressure



So much has been sacrificed for me
So much has been invested in me
The expectations are high
The pressure is set to the max
Of that I’m all too aware

Success is the goal
A hard thing it is to achieve
But in time I will
In time I shall
In time I must

Heavy it is to bare
Heavy like a motor
But just like one
Propel me it shall
Propel me it must

Slowly I reinforce my boat
Sturdy it needs to be
It must withstand the waves
In this endless sea
Easy it is to sink

With my compass handy
Lost I shan't be
Who knows when I’ll reach land
But the further the better
My motor will last

The journey I do enjoy
Ports I pass by
But stop I mustn't
My goal is much bigger
Small islands don’t satisfy me

Home is home
Return I always can
And return I shall
But only once
The destination has been reached

Eager they await
My return is imminent
And a glorious one it must be
So much has been sacrificed for me
No pressure but pressure


Scheme Aabxc xxxde cfxde xaxax aaxfx xbgfa xxdxx xgaAf
Poetic Form Etheree  (45%)
Tetractys  (30%)
Metre 11111011 111101001 001011 01011101 1111101 01101 01111101 10111 0111 0111 101111 101010 1111 01111 01111 1010111 101111 110101 01101 101111 111010 11111 111111 1010010 11011 0101101 1111 11110 111110 1101101 111 01111 00111 1101 0010111 10101 1011100 001001111 11111011 110110
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 930
Words 199
Sentences 1
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 5, 5, 5, 5, 5, 5
Lines Amount 40
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 90
Words per stanza (avg) 24

About this poem

I wrote this to address the pressure I feel to succeed in life. For me, the pressure is a heavy burden but it also gives me strength. This poem explains that relation.

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Written on November 14, 2022

Submitted by yonkamto on November 14, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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