Analysis of The Flower

Graham Byrne 1939 (Port Broughton)



Can a flower break the silence
Create wonder then a smile
Overcome the cry of sadness
Even for a little while

When someone’s lost a loved one
Sometimes our words in vain
Reach out to that outer flank
Not inward to the pain

Not knowing really what to say
One tries to think it through
What do you say to one you love
It’s difficult to do

The scene one can imagine
An orchid or a rose
Tendered by the gardener’s rake
And watered by the hose

With its fragrance and its beauty
Just given tenderly
A special gift to one you love
It might just set them free


Scheme XAXA BCXC XDED BFXF GGEG
Poetic Form Quatrain  (80%)
Etheree  (25%)
Metre 10101010 0110101 1001110 1010101 111011 0110101 1111101 110101 11010111 111111 11111111 110011 0111010 110101 10101001 010101 11100110 110100 01011111 111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 567
Words 119
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 88
Words per stanza (avg) 22

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Memory of a friend

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Submitted by grosbyrne on April 17, 2023

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Graham Byrne

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  • Poetmuse
    Great poem. I really enjoyed it, it raises your spirits which a good poem must it matters not if it is not cramped into a rigid poetic form 100%
    LikeReply10 months ago

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