Analysis of Titanic Shame, April 15 of 1912.



Women and children first, Folks
Too few lifeboats.
That iceberg over to the left
Bout three hundred yards now
Did the damage
At higher speed
The crash brought a gash.
Pity.

I scampered into one
Of the rescue craft.
Staff member yes, Programming.
But not gonna lose
My neck over this job.
When there is a
Clear way out.

Incoming waters will
Pass through adjacent
Buoyancy chambers
One after another.
Until the weight causes
A horrible listing
Sinking. Deaths.

And this was the unstoppable
Structure.
Best in the World
Out of Belfast.
Lots of Irish having
The privilege. Proudly.
But in the cheaper, crowded bunks.

We have gone on
Radio for any sort of Rescue.
Also the good folks in Halifax.
God help us.
Great is our trouble tonight.
Moon illuminates
Paddling refugees
With an eerie light.
Some scream. Some sing.


Scheme XXXXXXXA XXBXXXX XXXCXBX XCXXBAX XXXXDXXDB
Poetic Form
Metre 1001011 111 11010101 111011 1010 1101 01101 10 110011 10101 110110 11101 111011 1110 111 10101 11010 10010 110010 010110 010010 101 01100100 10 1001 111 111010 01010 10010101 1111 101101110 10011010 111 11101001 1010 10010 11101 1111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 819
Words 165
Sentences 22
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 8, 7, 7, 7, 9
Lines Amount 38
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 130
Words per stanza (avg) 28
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Written on June 01, 2023

Submitted by dougb.19255 on June 01, 2023

Modified by dougb.19255 on June 01, 2023

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Wayne Blair

Born in London. Graduated law 1976 Practised eleven years, Married Hilary 1974 Two kids Lauren 1980 And Jordan 1987. Business failed 1987. Moved not knowing whither. Happy hills of Waterloo Region. Mennonite Country. Thirty four years in Industry. No complaints. Poet, photographer, nature hiker. Harmonica busker. http://puffnchord7.blogspot.com/ more…

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